Revised Logo

After careful consideration and consultation,

this will be the logo I'm going with. I really love the way it came out and I think I've addressed some of the issues that initially arose. I'm proud of the product that came with re-visitation.

Update: Logo Revisions

So, since the critique for this logo didn't exactly go well, I decided to revamp the logo.
I abandoned all imagery that I had done previously and went back to the drawing board, starting from scratch. I tried to adhere to some of the feedback that I received in critique: difficult to read, too cliché, etc.
Here's what I've gotten so far:

^ I think this one has my favorite so far.
I would love feedback on these!
I will continue to update on my revision process.

Rebranding: Process

Initial sketches:

 Sketch I was satisfied with:

Translated digitally:

Logo for critique:

Last semester designs

Creative Brief

Rebranding: Village Pizza